Annonated Summary

Shafique, M., Kim, R., & Rafiq, M. (2018). Green roof benefits, opportunities and challenges – A review. Renewable and Sustainable Energy Reviews, 90, 757-773. doi:10.1016/j.rser.2018.04.006

This article focuses on the different types of benefits, opportunities, as well as the challenges that might be encountered when constructing and maintaining green roof. It includes the background information of green roof and the advantages that green roof technology could bring about. The behaviour of green roofs in different places, its ability to decrease stormwater and cost of the power usage, and the enhancement of its relationship with the nature are also accentuated in this article. It describes an effort that was made to show how green roof harvest rainwater and reduce global warming in an area. It is necessary to come up with economical green roof practices for the various benefits. Nonetheless, more thorough experiments need to be done for the different components of the green roof, and comprehensive research in managing the challenges is impending. The advantages of green roof show how essential it is when it comes to ensuring a safe city that is invulnerable to the change in climate. Countries are hence rewarding its citizens that makes the effort to own a green roof in their house. On the downside, green roof requires hefty construction and maintenance costs. It also faces the issue of roof leakage. This could however be dealt with lower-priced green roof design which is more functional and productive. Sophisticated alterations of the applications of the green roof are displayed in this article and it also mention the gaps and challenges faced during the research of the green roof. Recommendations are stated at the end of the article to improve the capabilities of green roof.

Summary_Reader Response Final

In the article “Boy Genius Boyan Slat’s Giant Ocean Clean Up Machine is Real”, Schiller (2017) stated that an improvised design of the trash collecting machine would help to collect plastic trash in the Pacific Ocean. Boyan Slat first envisioned his Ocean Clean Up machine in a TED talk and would commence hauling trash from the Great Pacific Garbage Patch, an area where plastics are accumulated in the ocean, in 2018. According to Schiller (2017), Slat’s design includes large booms that gathers trash with the assistance of Pacific’s currents. The booms function like an “artificial coastline” passively trapping debris into the centre, which would be offloaded to a boat monthly. Large anchors, which would be suspended with the booms ensures its manoeuvrability around the ocean. The suspended anchors form four sections, creating a huge surface area of 328 feet square that reduces the booms’ speed as trash circulates within the Patch. Schiller mentioned that a 0.6-mile prototype would be tested by Ocean Clean Up Foundation on the same year before being deployed in 2018. The total amount of debris collected is expected to accumulate up to a five-figure sum annually, which are intended to be recycled into usable items. This article gives a clear description on the design of the Ocean Clean Up machine and how it works. However, there is a lack of elaboration regarding the amount of plastic the machine would collect in five years, its efficiency, as well as whether this implementation would create an impact to the wildlife.

Firstly, though the article mentioned that half of the plastic trash would be collected from the ocean in five years, it failed to elaborate on whether it plans to clear half of the existing amount of plastics or take into consideration the additional amount that would accumulate at the patch over the next five years. Boyan Slat mentioned in the article that he expects to collect tens of thousands of tons of debris a year. According to Hasek (2018), it is “estimated that 1.15 to 2.41 million tonnes of plastic” are entering the ocean each year from rivers. That means while a five-figure ton of plastic is being removed from the patch every year, a seven-figure ton is being introduced. In this case, Slat is most likely referring to clearing half the trash from the patch from the existing amount in five years, not taking into account the figures of the plastics will keep rising which the article should have specified to its readers.

Secondly, while the article described Slat’s aim in the coming years, it did not mentioned about the efficiency of the Ocean Clean Up Machine and its performance in the ocean. Summers (2018) stated that Slat launched Ocean Clean Up system 001 in October 2018 which failed due to its inability to collect plastic. The main reason was due to the speed of the booms that was moving slower than the plastics that were carried by the current. The booms eventually lost most of the plastics that it had initially captured. I feel that such statements should be made only after they have tested the efficiency of the device.

Lastly, the machine's behaviour towards the marine life was not mentioned in the article. According to Knapton (2018), the device is unable to distinguish plastic and living things. This would result in the wildlife being harmed during the operation of the Ocean Clean Up Machine. I feel that this is a very crucial point in the context of this ocean clean up project, which has an intention to save the environment. However, a solution would not be one if it does the environment more harm than good. I am sure this is a subject that would affect the readers’ impression if it had been mentioned in the article. 

In conclusion, Boyan Slat should have come out with substantial evidence to back the objectives that he had set to meet. In this way, readers would be more convinced and feel supportive of his initiative towards reducing the plastic waste in the ocean.

References:

Hasek, G. (2018, May). Plastic Pollution: Single Use Plastic Impact on Our Oceans. Green Lodging News, Retrieved from https://www.greenlodgingnews.com/plastic-pollution-single-use-plastic-impact-on-our-oceans/

Knapton, S. (2018, August). Device to clean-up Great Pacific Garbage Patch could harm wildlife, warn conservationists. The Telegraph, Retrieved from https://www.telegraph.co.uk/science/2018/08/07/device-clean-up-great-pacific-garbage-patch-could-harm-wildlife/

Schiller, B. (2017, November). Boy Genius Boyan Slat’s Giant Ocean Cleanup Machine Is Real. Fast Company, Retrieved from https://www.fastcompany.com/40419899/boy-genius-boyan-slats-giant-ocean-cleanup-machine-is-real

Summers, H. (2018, December). Great Pacific garbage patch $20m cleanup fails to collect plastic. The Guardian, Retrieved from https://www.theguardian.com/environment/2018/dec/20/great-pacific-garbage-patch-20m-cleanup-fails-to-collect-plastic

Summary exercise in point form

In the article “Boy Genius Boyan Slat’s Giant Ocean Cleanup Machine is Real,” Schiller (2017) stated that an improvised design of the trash collecting machine would help to collect plastic trash in the Pacific Ocean.

•            The Great Pacific Garbage Patch is an area of the ocean where currents concentrate the plastic we throw into the ocean.

•            Boyan Slat, who first set out a vision of his Ocean Cleanup machine in a TED talk six years ago when he was just 17, announced that he’ll begin hauling trash from the Patch in 2018.

•            Slat’s design involves massive booms that collect trash using the Pacific’s own currents.

•            The booms act as an “artificial coastline” passively catching and then concentrating debris into the centre, from where it’s offloaded to a boat that sweeps by periodically.

•            He plans to suspend the booms with large anchors that float in deeper water, so the booms shift around the ocean.

•            The anchors will be suspended on lines in four segments, each 40 feet tall and 13 feet wide.

•            They have a total surface area of 328 feet square, enough to provide plenty of drag to slow down the booms as plastic trash circulates around the “gyre”–a swirling trash vortex within the Garbage Patch.

•            Using a floating system has advantages in both cost and time.

•            The Ocean Cleanup Foundation, now numbering 65 people, will begin testing a 0.6-mile prototype, before full deployment in 2018.

•            Slat expects to collect tens of thousands of tons of debris a year, and for each device to need emptying every month.

•            The long-term plan is to recycle all the plastic collected into items like car bumpers, chairs, and eyewear.

Reported Speech

Student LS shared that he drinks bubble tea on a daily basis to satisfy his cravings. However, he claimed that as soon as his parents found out this bad habit of him, they nagged him for drinking such costly beverage. In addition, he mentioned that not only does the beverage has no nutritional value, it also increases his risk of getting diabetes due to its high sugar content. 

Upon several considerations, Student LS reflected that he should kick off this habit. Since this had been something that he had never missed out on a single day, he knew he would not be able to shake it off easily. He later discovered that he has a liking for green tea. He then decided to divert his attention to it, which has minimised his cravings for bubble tea ever since.

Formal Introduction

Dear Professor Brad,

My name is Jordon Poh Jun Hui. I am currently a year one student in Singapore Institute of Technology (SIT), majoring in civil engineering. I graduated from Singapore Polytechnic with a diploma in aeronautical engineering in 2016. The main reason for the change in my course of specialisation was due to my lack of passion in the aviation industry. As I have always been obsessed with tall buildings and have had the ambition to be part of its construction process, I am confident that civil engineering is right for me.

Being a fitness enthusiast, I workout up to six times a week. Apart from hitting the gym, which I do most frequently, I enjoy casual gatherings with my close friends for a game of basketball or soccer. In addition, I developed interest in tennis recently and I am determined to become professional in this sport to represent SIT for tournaments in the coming years.

One of my strengths would be being open-minded when communicating with people. I am always open to listen to the other person’s point of view. Not only does this attitude enable me to receive opinions that I might not have thought of, it also allows me to engage in a more honest and productive conversation with the person.

My weakness would be not able to speak in English fluently. Growing up from a mandarin-speaking family, I became so comfortable in speaking Mandarin that I realised that I only got to speak English within my circle of friends. The fact that most of my friends are so used to speaking Singlish only exacerbates the problem.

By the end of this module, I hope to be able to converse fluently in English and to express myself with confidence when I speak or write.

Thank you for taking your time to read. I look forward to learning a wide range of skills and abilities from your insightful lessons.

Best Regards,

Jordon Poh
CVE1281
Group 4


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